please rewrite according to My prof. feedback. This is what he said below
In your synopsis, you say the narrative outlines the stranger’s life, but I’m not sure what you mean or in what way this happens. Give a sense of the outline or the actions the investigators take. How does the stranger end up investigating with the detective?
Also, is the stranger really a stranger if everyone gets to know him at the clubs? be clear about what you mean here.
This assignment must have a step oultine as well. please re-read- the instructions as well as the example provided and re-submit.
NOV 9th 2020
MES- 153 Scriptwriting
Assignment # 6: Short Narrative Fiction Synopsis & Step Outline
The Missing WomenSynopsisA charming and good-looking stranger passing by Belmont Town decides to spend afew days before going on with his journey. However, women start missing a few daysafter his arrival. Everyone points fingers at him since women flock around him everynight in the town pub. Since he is the main suspect, he is arrested and has to prove hisinnocence. Thus, the narrative outlines the stranger’s life and what he does to find theserial killer who is out to tarnish his name. While investigating with the detective, heends up falling in love once again.IntroductionIntroducing the characters and setting to the viewer. The leading character is thestranger who has just gotten to town. The minor characters are the residents of BelmontTown who keep the plot moving. The viewer is introduced to Belmont town, where the
action takes place. The specific location is the Downtown Pub, which is in the center ofthe city.MiddleThe viewer is introduced to the conflict of the story. Women have been disappearingmysteriously after the stranger showed up in town. He is arrested as the main suspect,and an investigation ensued. The stranger works hand in hand with the investigator tofind the serial killer. During the investigation, his promiscuous ways come out to light.However, he believes that he is innocent despite his sinful ways.EndThere is a turn of events as the film is coming to an end when the stranger falls in lovewith the investigator. He believes that the investigator has mended his broken heart andtaught him to love again. The serial killer, the town’s loner, is discovered and arrested.
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