Directions: A friend has asked you for help with the following application letter. Rewrite and revise it as needed. The letter is attached below. You may open the attachment to make your revisions, save, and submit.
Hey ms. Brown,
Please consider my application for the position of assistant in the Engineering Department. i am a second year student majoring in electrical engineering technology. I love dogs, and I love swimming. In addition, I am presently an apprentice with your company (even though y’all don’t pay that much) and would like to continue my employment in the Engineering Department.
I have 6 years’ experience in electronics, including 2 years of engineering studies. I am confident my background will enable me to assist the engineers, and i would appreciate the chance to improve my skills through their knowledge and experience. I can fix almost anything that breaks. I recently took a class about engineering, and it helped me as an apprentice. I do not know much about being an assistant; however, I am willing to get your coffee and respond to your emails as fast as I can. Please hire me.
I would appreciate the opportunity to discuss the possibilities and benefits of a position in the Engineering Department at Concord Electric. I know that one benefit is me making more cheddar! Plus, I’m cute and funny. Funny like, I make great jokes and I’m fun to be around. Not funny like funny looking. Please phone me any weekday after 3:00 p.m. at (555) 568-9867. I hope to hear from you soon.
The Best chance you got!
Rihanna Beyoncé Mills-Wilson
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