Personal Statement and Portfolio (Leadership, Community, Other)


Admisson Essay & Reflective writing.

Can you please assist me presenting the best possible portfolio to get into Medical School. I require a personal statement of 800 words and three sets of four seperate experiences (subjects: leadership, community, other achievements) of 80 words each. The idea of the experiences is to show how your life has made you the person you are and how you can be a doctor in the future. Details of the purpose, requirements and background information are in the attached document. Please label each seperate experience. Please extrapolate, interpolate, correct, redirect as much as needed to present myself in the way the university needs. Please message if there is anthing else that you need.

Ways that marks can be lost are as follows:

Development – The experience needs more explanation.

Grammar – There is a grammar issue that needs resolving.

Phrasing – The way that the sentence has been phrased needs revisiting.

Wordiness – The phrasing is either too complex or uses too many words for the development of that idea.

Insight – The insight from the experience needs to be better illustrated.

Relevance- The idea does not fit with the rest of the paragraph.

Tips for Personal Statement:

Avoid Cliche’s

Captivate your reader and tell a narrative

Have a structure so it’s easy to follow (i.e intro, body, conclusion)

Keep thestatement as one whole integral piece by using transition words or phrases

Showing vs Telling – Do not state you are compassionate use examples to show that you are

To experience paragraphs/portfolio require:

  1. Describe in detail what the activity or achievement involved
  2. Demonstrate what skills and qualities you’ve gained
  3. Provide a reflection on how it affected you
  4. Tie your experiences to matchthe qualities the universities are looking for and how itwill make you a proficient medical practitioner
  5. Address why the experience is important to the section and how does it advance your role.

Leadership Good Example:As a committed leader of my Youth Group, I was fortunate to be chosen to train & mentor thefuture Junior Leaders, whilst guiding the current cohort. I developed and lead workshops ontopics including; the value of informal education, critical thinking, pedagogy & leadership styles.Preparing others for leadership proved a valuable lesson for me, pushing me to grow into a bettermentor & to better understand the significance of a shared & reciprocal education.

Community Good Example:As a head receptionist in a community GP clinic, I was fortunate to be welcomed into the ruralcommunity of Cowra. As a town with varying demographics & socioeconomic levels, I gainedunique insights into the service and care that the doctors provided to the community. As areceptionist, it was a pleasure to liaise with & help patients. The warmth of both the doctors andour patients encouraged my ongoing effort to provide the best service I could.

Other Good Example:During my undergraduate degree, I wrote and published a meta-analysis comparing alcoholharm-reduction interventions. The experience challenged me to critically analyse literature tocollect appropriate studies for comparison. As I looked for strong studies to include in theanalysis, the importance of the scientific method of knowledge generation, so essential to theprogression of modern medicine, were emphasised

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